I'm gonna throw the sequel into the scraps(but still keep it in the section), even though I'm going to fix the mistakes I will mention here.
Since I couldn't concentrate as well as I did from the first series, I started to repeat words, and I didn't realize that till ~
Amaranth-Pink told me. "It was getting kind of gay." And I totally agree with that.
It's annoying to hear the own creator talk down their work, but let's be honest. Sometimes it's the truth. I used 'dodge' WAY too much in 7-8, and I'm working to fix that word problem. But, it just makes more sense to just throw the sequel into the scraps because it didn't do as well as my original story.
I somewhat blame me working on 'fear' and the start of 'mo'kar temple' on the problems of the sequel, and I also blame not 'feeling' it. I knew I didn't want to do the sequel, I knew I didn't want to, but even though you don't want to, you end up doing that anyway to satisfy that empty spot, because it bothers you, and the faults begin.
I've also gone back to my original style, so expect two chapters at a time for the temple story (and from reading the above, you'll understand why.) Thanks a lot.
Story Progress
Sequel:

Fear Part I:




Mo'Kar Temple:


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